Friday, October 31, 2008

Essays written

Ok, so. I've got my Caltech essays all sorted out. I've put a freeze on the revisions. No more dramatic ones. So, the products I've got over here, and if you could help proofread them, I'd be REALLY thankful. And I'll be sure to keep this link updated. The application is due.... Monday. So, I've gone about as far as I can with editing on my own, so I'm gonna leave off the essay editing and look over the rest of my app. But if you can read these essays and offer suggestions, that'll be extremely wonderful. And if I get into Caltech, I'll be very grateful! So, the first Common App prompt, I've got my essay here:

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_30c3kqqgc9
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_34fm7vvjcq
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_35s5hbkphm
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_37g7bmt3ct
And for the supplement:
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_32hmhbmjgc
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_33hdkr99gv
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_36ggd7zgg8
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfb2kwpd_38kz65rggh
Thanks a lot and, any suggestions would be appreciated. Just leave a comment, send me an IM, or send me an e-m

8 comments:

tuxv said...

Great essays :D I think the first essay is better, it's a unique creation. And I'm sure that it will help you to get into Caltech. And good luck for your future :) you rock! I know that you are going to make it to Caltech.

Jim Zhang said...

Gee. Considering you already got into Caltech, I'm pretty sure you won't need my help that much anymore.

Congrats again? For the...tenth time or something.

Yeah. Congrats.

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